User:2funky/Key Biodiversity Area/JazGrabau Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * 2funky


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:2funky/Key_Biodiversity_Area?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Key Biodiversity Area

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)