User:2wsdfr56yhnji90/Pat Gomez/Smolpenguin Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

2wsdfr56yhnji90


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:2wsdfr56yhnji90/Pat_Gomez?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the section titled "biography" could use a more specific word like "education." In the section about War Stories, the quote should be cited. This article is clearly and concisely written, I detect no bias or editorializing of information