User:32Dugg/African bush elephant/Erinkaline Peer Review

The information added to this article is concise and easy to understand. The way you explained what homeothermy is and then placed that word in parentheses will help avoid confusion for readers who may not understand the scientific term. I would suggest fully spelling out the word “temperatures” in the last sentence instead of just using “temps”. This just makes the article seem more scholarly. I think mentioning specifically something about this process keeping the elephant “cool” might be helpful for someone who is reading the article that has less understanding of thermoregulation. Great job with organization, explaining scientific jargon, using reliable sources, and keeping neutrality.

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