User:3milysk15/Travel nursing/Mingalls22 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

3milysk15


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:3milysk15/Travel Nursing/
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Travel nursing

Evaluate the drafted changes
Content:


 * It is all up to date and good content. I feel like you did a very good job adding what needed added.

Tone and Balance


 * Both tone and balance of the added information is good. Nothing appears biased.

Sources and References


 * I see the sources listed and they all appear very good. However, the sources are not linked so I can not check up on if the links are working or make sure all the information is represented correctly.

Organization


 * The first sentence of the addition to Pay could be made more concise. Also the third sentence has a spelling error of "cost" and could be considered a run-on sentence. It is all very good points they just need separated. Also a comma added to the $5,000 at the end of that section.
 * In the last sentence of the assignment section, I think that the comma after "included" could be removed.
 * In the requirements section the only change I would make is to make the sentences a little more concise. They were a bit repetitive.

Overall impressions


 * Overall, the article is made much better with these additions. The tone is super good and balanced. Just a couple small edits and it will be perfect.