User:410Julia/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
(Talk:Bolin (The Legend of Korra)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I am a fan of the Legends of Korra, and the Avatar series as a whole. I feel as though I have enough knowledge of Bolin to properly evaluate this article. Additionally this article needs improvement on the character development of Bolin, which I feel as though I have the capacity and knowledge to do, to a certain degree.

Evaluate the article
Content


 * Everything is relevant that is posted, I learned more about the origin story of Bolin. However there should be more elaboration on the Ruins of the Empire.
 * I am aware there will be a reboot of Avatar, and I wonder if Korra will also be incorporated so I am curious if Bolin will be included if that is in the new series.
 * there is an equity gap for the Legends of Korra comic series Ruins of the Empire
 * The other medias can be improved, perhaps social media execution of the character, fandoms, etc.

Tone

Organization
 * The article is neutral, it is informative on the character of Bolin. However it is favorable towards his character.
 * There is underrepresented content on the comic book series of The Legends of Korra: Bolin


 * I like the organization. It goes from the series by seasons, and explains Bolin's character. While someone could go through episode by episode to explain Bolin's character throughout each episode I feel as though the description by season is adequate and captures his essence. Then the article goes on to describe the comic books which needs more content. The reception content seems accurate, I am unaware of the entirely of the reception.

Sources

Images
 * the sources I checked all worked, and went to Legends of Korra related content.


 * The images utilized provide an image of Bolin is and provides and image of Bolin's voice.
 * Additionally provides him and image of him with another character during a turning point of the series. A moment of character development for Bolin.

Talk Page


 * the talk page asks for adding more information. There is a huge fandom of the Legends of Korra, and I feel like there is a large group that holds massive amounts of knowledge and passion for the series and they should add to it. Specifically the comic book series section.
 * The article is rated a C due to its poor elaboration on the whole character of Bolin, and how other characters impact him and make him a round character.