User:4Yz12/Soil Chemistry/Cali0323 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:4Yz12


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:4Yz12/Soil Chemistry
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like the edits that have been made so far because it simplified the article in a way that it is more understandable to someone who knows nothing about soil chemistry.

I also like the layout of the article, it makes it easy to follow.

Are you going to add back in the history and methods of investigation sections? I think maybe you should that way we have more background on the subject.

Underneath each heading, does the first sentence need to be in bold? I don't think that really adds anything to the article, I think it would be okay without it.

Very good start! Overall it looks good.