User:4realtraveler/Lululemon/Barry1819 Peer Review

General info
4realtraveler
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:4realtraveler/Lululemon
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Lululemon Athletica

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

-Lead is updated, gives a good concise introductory of the article

Content:

-Content added is relevant, and up to date. I think that all of the added content belongs, I like the specific details of how they plan to be more sustainable

Tone and Balance:

-Content is neutral, I don't think any of it is biased or persuasive. You go against their slogan in the end, but it is factual and I think you presented it in a non-biased way.

Sources and References:

-I do not see any citations or references

Organization:

-Content is well written and organized, no spelling or grammar errors

Images and Media:

-No images added

Overall impressions:

-I do think that this contribution adds to the overall quality of the article. It is well written, relevant and important information. Just make sure to add your citations