User:4realtraveler/Netflix/Breadman10 Peer Review

General info
4realtraveler
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:4realtraveler/Netflix
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Netflix

Evaluate the drafted changes
LEAD- I think your opening is good and gives a good description of what your company really does. I think you have a strong intro sentence and supporting sentences, and it really has to do with how they are responding to the challenges of climate change, which is spot on. I don't think it is over detailed and it is just right, well done!

CONTENT- Your content is very relevant to the topic and gives a few examples of how Netflix is trying to do their part in the whole situation of global climate change. Your sources are relatively recent and are academically cited, which is always a good thing. I personally don't know how you could improve the content, but overall I thought it was good.

I think the overall tone of your article was smooth and easy to read, maybe add a picture or 2 that is allowed and not eligible for copyright, other than that I thought ur writing was great!