User:4theloveofAH/Eastern Gray Squirrel/AloofCanine72 Peer Review

Peer review by AloofCanine

-There is no lead which probably can be included But I don't see an issue with not having a lead.

The Content

-after talking with the authors of the sandbox, they told me that the information they were going to put into the original article is additional information they found online and think it should be placed inside the wikipedia article. They seem to have already placed their information from the sandbox into the original article as this is being written. However with all this information given there seems to be a non-working link in the bottom of the draft. That should be fixed right away. Because the info they give us is about their habitat, diet, diseases, behavior, and ecosystem but not link to go into to see where this information came from.

Tone

-It does look like the tone from the authors seems neutral as they are only talking about the squirrel's habitats and not how they feel about the squirrels.

images and media

-seems like since this is an already existing article that the images were already placed before. I would say there is good enough pictures in this article to show to readers an extensive overview of what a eastern gray squirrel is. There is even a video that is posted into the article of a squirrel eating a cicada which I never knew squirrels did that.

Overall

-I'm liking the new information and surprised myself that this information wasn't included into the article before.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

-this work is from 4theloveofAH and Ahhinkson. Two students from the Brooklyn College ecology class


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:4theloveofAH/Eastern Gray Squirrel this should be the link of the draft I am reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Eastern gray squirrel this is the link of the current existing article.

Evaluate the drafted changes
Maybe in the response if you want to write for me what information you are trying to look for in these squirrels. I am willing to help out and find you articles related in any additional information you want to put. I can also try to show you how you can provide a proper link for the article you are working on.