User:5150EditWiki/Death anxiety/Dr.healthtoto Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)5150EditWiki


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:5150EditWiki/Death_anxiety?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Death anxiety

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

This is a very good addition to this article. It is relevant to the topic and something that should be included. I think more information will be added to this section in the future as more studies come out. I would only think maybe it should go up higher in the article? Due to its current relevance?

This section seems well balanced and neutral, making points that correlate to the topic. I think it was important to acknowledge that it hit the front line workers harder than the rest of the population.

I checked the links and found a couple of problems. On Wikipedia reference link 62 and 63 are the same.

Also, one of the cited articles has been removed from the websites. It’s link 61 on Wikipedia. It’s the article: "Psychological Distress Associated with COVID-19: Estimations of Threat and the Relationship with Death Anxiety". Author: Newton-John.

The website now has an error message that says:

“This paper has been removed from SSRN at the request of the author, SSRN, or the rights holder.”

Sorry about that. If you haven’t experienced this before, welcome to the world of disappearing research.

Also, a couple of grammatical suggestions:

wellbeing

Should be: well-being.

“Millions of people around the world have died from COVID-19”

Should be: “Millions of people around the world died from COVID-19”

Great work and research!