User:56ap12/Karin Fong/Julianneteres Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Karin Fong


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:56ap12/Karin_Fong?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:56ap12/Karin_Fong?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:56ap12/Karin_Fong?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, I think its excellent and coherent. The chart of television nominations are really good and the references. On a technical level it looks really strong I think it just need the blanks to be filled in with additional research. The reason why these artists don't have a wikipedia page in the first place is because there isn't a ton of research on available. But I think this article just needs the blanks to be filled in and it should be ready for publishing.