User:5740 Grant L/Conditional probability/EyeOfTheUniverse Peer Review

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 * Conditional probability

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article is a popular one, with a lot of edits so finding major things to change can be difficult. In which case my recommendation would be finding stuff to add. This would require looking into applications of conditional probability and fleshing out an applications section. This can be very fruitful to a lot of fields if made diverse enough. I would recommend at least 5 different examples to give a good diversity. Use in inference can even be included as one of those 5.