User:5fm9/Kate NV/DoctorBoon Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

5fm9


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:5fm9/Kate NV


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Kate NV

Tone and Balance
The tone provided in your article is neutral when speaking of their connection Russian new wave. The information is given at a rate that does not overload the reader, and gets to the point.

Organization and Content
For the most part all the information given in your article sounds correctly organized, however perhaps add some more to the "indi" scene to bridge your info smoother. If possible expand on the kinds of inspirations she had. If she has any stories behind her inspiration perhaps add them to give more background to her as a person (a nit pick mind you.)

References and Sources
Citations seem to be correctly used, perhaps dig into some more "indi" information to add to that.

Images/Media
No images were used, perhaps find something to add to your article so the reader can visualize what the artist does, or who they are.

Overall Impressions
For the most part your article is great, in fact I would say far more organized than my own. Well done! Just add some more information on the "indi" scene, but that could just be a nitpick of my own. But since 300 words is the minimum, if you'd like to expand on this more, I would suggest it! Additionally if you could find any kind of quotes from her made in any kind of interview, that might let us understand her as a person more, along with her artistry. That said, your overall article is really impressive and the number of citations you made is great! Definitely made me want to check her out with her inspirations being sailor moon and city pop, great inclusions!!