User:6lacrosse/Islam in the African diaspora/Eshafer68 Peer Review

Lead

Lead was created by Declan Includes information used so far. It seems to include the major sections so far. Lead is concise.

Content

The content is Neutral. The content is up to date. There is content that he has not gotten to yet. The content is addressing how Islam spread but hasn't mentioned an equity gap yet.

Tone and Balance

There are no heavily balanced claims. Nothing is trying to persuade the reader in a certain direction

Sources and References

The sources are all reliable and backed correctly. There is a good number of sources added so far. The links work as intended. The content added has good grammar is clear and concise.

Images and Media

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Overall Impressions

The content is overall improved by a ton. The article still needs to be a little beefier. The strength of the content added so far gives the reader context on the Background of the article.

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