User:7ommybo1228/Hou Yaowen/Nathan Yu 2023 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

7ommybo1228


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:7ommybo1228/Hou_Yaowen?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The beginning of the article introduces the topic clearly and lead the reader into the article easily. The lead doesn’t include any information that is not present in the article. The content added is neural and informative. There is no claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position. The content accurately reflect the cited sources and the links of cited sources are working well.