User:801johnna/Foster care in the United States/Joshuapak11 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?Johnna Spikes (801johnna)
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:801johnna/Foster care in the United States
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Foster care in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hey Johnna!

Once again, I just wanted to reiterate how impressed I am with the detailed legend you've put together!! Please reference my comments and evaluations I gave you on your other article on School Resource Officer... Here is a copy of it below:

"I noticed you haven't quite finalized any drafted changes in your sandbox for this article quite yet. No worries, though! I see you've got some great notes and brainstorming ideas already. We're not aiming to go live with our final sandbox changes until next week, so there's time, but...

One thing I noticed is that you haven't directly added your ideas to specific sections of the article yet. Your thoughts are detailed and relevant to the topic of "[Foster care in the United States]", but there's nothing for me to compare it to directly correlated from the Wikipedia article. And this is what you are supposed to do up to this point because your edits will be integrated into the relevant areas of the article. Once you do that, I'll come back and take a look to see your brainstorming ideas weaved together within your article as a whole :). Looking forward to seeing your progress!"