User:801johnna/School resource officer/IG270 Peer Review

General info
801johnna
 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:801johnna/School_resource_officer?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
Instead of stating the controversy outright start with a neutral introductio:n "School resource officers (SROs) in educational settings spark debate, touching on education, justice, and safety."

Ensure criticisms and benefits of SROs are presented with equal detail and neutrality Avoid using language like "punitive nature and intimidation" unless directly quoting a source. Instead, explain critics' concerns that SROs may be seen as punitive or intimidating.

give more explanation for terms like "power imbalance" and "dominance" - Describe how an SRO’s presence might change traditional power dynamics between students and school staff.

Where relevant, link to other Wikipedia pages (e.g., "prefrontal lobe development," "cultural competency") f



Maintain neutrality throughout. Instead of saying "Scholars argue that SROs police unfairly," a more neutral statement could be, "Some scholars express concerns about potential biases in how SROs enforce discipline, particularly regarding racial and disability-related disparities."