User:855Quilly/Khokhloma/Dvuliudsklifski Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

855Quilly


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:855Quilly/Khokhloma


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Khokhloma

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * Yes. Restructuring to provide a specific design elements section will help readers locate information related to their reasons for visiting the page.
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * Adding descriptions of the design elements and describing what they typically look like is invaluable information and particularly will go well with the existing information on process and the more technical aspects. I'm curious how you'll structure your additions alongside this older information!
 * How can the content added be improved?
 * Any information you could find about regional variants or geographic distribution (it is "Russian," but Russian is/can be defined in many ways!) would be very helpful and I can imagine that might be the kind of information people might look for in a Wikipedia article.
 * Here's a 3D tour of the khokhloma museum the existing article references! I don't have time to search for the spoon, but it's pretty near and interesting! https://www.goldenhohloma.com/turizm/3d-tours/