User:92ttenrab/Adrienne Warren/Bridgetanscombe Peer Review

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This is a good article that writes neutrally and shows her significant contributions. Only note would be on her personal life where you say you need to write more, so I feel like me commenting on that would be unnecessary. The amount of sources is really great too. Good work and I apologize if editing one another's pages isn't necessary. I have no idea how to open my own sandbox within our class page and I might be incorrect in thinking I have to do peer-reviews before it lets me make my own page. If that's the case, just ignore me.