User:92ttenrab/Adrienne Warren/Btsvtxten- Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

92ttenrab


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:92ttenrab/Adrienne Warren
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Adrienne Warren

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Early Life
 * I like how you were able to flesh out this section with relevant information. There is a neutral tone and your citations all work. I do think it would be good to add a citation after the "just stopped growing" line.
 * Education/Training
 * It was smart to add this as its own section. Especially because she attended a performing arts school before college. I am wondering if you could find any acting credits from her time in college (or even the performing art school).
 * Is it possible to make one "Career" section & then group "pre-broadway/regional work", "broadway", and "television and film" under that header?
 * Broadway
 * i like the sub-sections for each show
 * this could be somewhat interpreted as an opinion "Which is something she later would have to do in her performance in Tina."
 * idk if you have a citation for that note
 * Television and Film
 * could be helpful for you to say which shows she was more of a guest role and which shows she was a lead in
 * Personal Life
 * lol I like that you added the info about her dog - hopefully you can find more info to add
 * Overall Notes:
 * Good neutral tone throughout and the citations I tried all worked
 * Think about what information that you add to the page that can be linked to other wikipedia pages
 * do you need a "see also" section?