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4th assessment

It has been requested that this article be re-assessed for WikiProject Schools. The article certainly looks better than when I last assessed it, so well done to all editors who helped improve it, there are now some sources and the article is better structured. As a whole I agree the article is probably of good enough quality now for C-class, however a lot of improvements for the article to meet B-class. First, the lead is rather short, it currently introduces the article but should also summarise all the sections, see WP:LEAD. The information section should be redundant to the infobox, and hence can be removed. The College Council and various other roles section has an awkward title and is rather trivial in nature, this perhaps could be merged into a extracurricular activities section, see WP:WPSCH/AG.

That should be enough suggestions to last a while! Camaron · Christopher · talk 11:41, 25 August 2009 (UTC)