User:99rebound/Local differential privacy/Hotpink789! Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

99rebound


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:99rebound/Local differential privacy


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Local differential privacy

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

Great lead section! Gave me a great overview of the subject. One potential suggestion would be to include a short definition of differential privacy, because readers might not be familiar with that term.

Content:

Under the applications section, it would be helpful to define each of the applications you talk about. Make sure to cite all the information you provide.

You do a great job of not being biased and sticking to the facts.

I was confused by the "ε-local differential privacy" section. What is the significance of the formula?

I think you could expand more on the deployment section. What is the significance of these companies using LDP?

Images and media:

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Overall:

Great job! I just had a few suggestions. Good luck continuing your article.