User:99rebound/Local differential privacy/Luckyclover44 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

99rebound


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:99rebound/Local differential privacy


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Local differential privacy

Lead

 * Lead has been updated to reflect changes in the article
 * Lead includes a concise and relevant introductory sentence
 * Lead does not include information that's not in the article
 * Lead is concise and not overly detailed, but a bit technical
 * Might be helpful to explain things in "layman's terms" as well

Content

 * Content added is relevant to the topic
 * Content is up to date

Tone and Balance

 * Content is neutral
 * No biased, overrepresented, or underrepresented views
 * No persuasion

Sources and References

 * Sources appear to be reliable
 * Sources are diverse
 * There are some areas where there is a lack of citations (e.g. first couple of sentences under "Applications")

Organization

 * Article is well-organized and structured
 * No spelling or grammatical errors
 * Make sure to link to other Wikipedia articles (i.e. artificial intelligence)

Overall
Great job! I really enjoyed reading your article on local differential privacy. The additional information you added on applications really made the article come to life and more understandable! Great work!