User:A.Evanzz/Environmental communication/Johnduffy23 Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
I thought you did an awesome job of using your sources that are easily accessible and composing a well thought out overview of your topic. I was unaware of what environmental communication was, and it was organized in a nice way that made it easy for me to comprehend your topic. I really like how you used a visual aid when talking about climate change communication, I also really liked how you had a section where you were able to describe how this can relate to our lives while still maintaining a neutral tone. The only thing I noticed were some missing citations in the "symbolic actions" section, but other than that your work is great and the topic was interesting to learn about. Good Job!