User:A.Nachee/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
https://w.wiki/9R8W

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose the article on workplace violence because I have worked in the human resources sector for 12+ years and have witnessed the mental breakdown and self-harm reactions of employees that were terminated. Although I have never been a victim of work violence, from my experiences in each situation, I’ve gained an awareness of how quickly situations can escalate without a warning. I believe that preventative strategies for any violence or health and safety concerns should be implemented in every workplace.

After reading this article, I didn’t feel like I read anything that would make me want to keep reading or researching this topic. Violence is a noun, and this article didn’t give me a sensation of the noun. I appreciate the deadly examples; however, an updated example would have been satisfying.

Evaluate the article
The lead section of this article indicated an introductory sentence stating the meaning of workplace violence, OSHA rights, and four categories of how violence is defined, broken down by levels. The content of this article needs updating, and maybe some of the examples should be attached to the four categories of how violence is defined. The organization of this article could be better, and Table 1. is confusing; the Reference 16 link doesn’t work. I agree with Talk; the entire article needs a rewrite, and there are more examples of workers than actual violence in the workplace.