User:A. Lee Crawford/Vocal register/DanBunting22 Peer Review

General info
A. Lee Crawford
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?diff=1209851719&oldid=1195460102&title=Vocal_register
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Vocal registration is an incredibly important topic in voice pedagogy and is frequently misunderstood. I think you did a fantastic job of covering some of the crucial points for understanding this topic. The addition of a passagio paragraph was much needed. The tone of the article is neutral and practical and does not add unnecessary information. The additionally added sources are also great and provide a lot of valuable information. Christian Herbst's glottal configurations are crucial to understanding registration in human voicing. This was a very solid source to add. All the addition sources keep a nice neutral tone and are peer reviewed. The only thing I would say moving forward is to just keep adding great content!