User:A. Lee Crawford/Vocal register/Tenorsalih Peer Review

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A. Lee Crawford
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Dear Annalee, I went through the Vocal Register article and particularly focused on your contribution. I first would like to mention an obvious error with the citation that the same paper appears three times; 10, 11, and 13 are the same articles.

It is a great idea to add the Passaggio section to this article and the citations you refer to are very convenient with this section.

Regarding the paragraph about glottal configuration you provided a lot of information, and again the citation you referenced seems very convenient with this paragraph. Here the language could be improved, I also would review the sentence "A glottal configuration is the area .......".

Overall your contributions are very appropriate with this article. Both the Passaggio section and Glottal Configuration paragraph are very informative. It is always very convenient to make the changes on the sandbox and receive feedback before submitting on Wiki.