User:A.staleto/Writing Therapy/Julianatejada Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

a.staleto


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:A.staleto/Writing_Therapy?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Writing therapy

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think the edits look really good so far. You did a good job of incorporating authors to back up the textual evidence you provided!