User:A1243617202/Expressive language disorder/McKinlieGray Peer Review

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User A1243617202 and group
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:A1243617202/Expressive language disorder
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):James V. Neel

Evaluate the drafted changes
Great job overall.

The article set up in the sandbox looks good, and the notes about in-text citations indicate that everything is on the right track. However, since the section seems sparse, I suggest expanding on the genetic aspect to provide a more comprehensive understanding (adding more details about the FOXP2 gene, etc..).

Additionally, it would be beneficial to elaborate on how the diagnosis of 'pure SLI' is conducted and the overall effect on education. Keep up the good work!