User:A1c23/Sensory deprivation/JeremieCasavant Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

A1c23, Leo irineo, Koada21, Santiago 823724, Eriix06


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Sensory deprivation
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sensory deprivation

Evaluate the drafted changes
Pros:


 * 1) Very well-written and easy to read
 * 2) The topic is well-explored and doesn’t go off topic
 * 3) Informative

Cons:


 * 1) Needs more information and context
 * 2) The format is a bit hard to follow
 * 3) Missing images or visual support
 * 4) Few grammar mistakes - easy fix!