User:A1morales/Urban planning education/Zattaras Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Alexandra (A1morales)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:A1morales/Urban_planning_education?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Urban planning education
 * Urban planning education

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead


 * I think you should update the current articles lead section to encompass the new information you added because currently you aren't editing it.

Content


 * The content does shed light on how youth are an excluded group in urban planning. The grammar is good as well. It also flows very well. I think you might want to focus less on organizations and focus more on why it is important for youth to be involved in urban planning.

Tone and Balance


 * Tone is neutral for the most part but it could be improved by adding a counter argument for why some people think youth should be included in urban planning .In addition, claiming youth have not been given political power is subjective so maybe add examples to prove that without flat out saying it.

Sources and References


 * Sources are relatively current snd relevant. Maybe adding a couple more sources will make your work even better.

Organization


 * I like how you framed this new section you added. I feel like it flowed very well

Images and Media


 * can use images and media to add to value of article

Overall Impression


 * Great job! Definitely added value and valuable information to the project. I think again you can add a bit more sources. And i think you did a great job organizing your article. I think you can also improve on keeping a neutral tone