User:A2003b/Stop! In the Name of Love/Osterhc1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

A2003b


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:A2003b/Stop%21_In_the_Name_of_Love?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Stop! In the Name of Love

Evaluate the drafted changes
Content


 * How did the song originate? How did it come to be? There is little concerning the songs background.
 * Who is Diana Ross? Touch base on her history a little bit?
 * There are a lot of statistics and rankings rather than any sentences that describe the group's background or personal history

Sources and References

This is a broad amount of sources and references are good, but there are a lot of rankings, many of which have sources in different languages (some even from Iceland). It appears like there is plenty of info due to the vast amount of sources, but in reality, the sources describe abrupt statements to show the songs individual ranking in different countries. This relates to content as well, but where are the sources describing the group or the groups/songs origination?

Organization


 * The article feels very choppy. I feel like I am reading off a list when in reality that is not what it should be. Include more context or detail about non-stastical facts that would allow the article to flow rather than just reading stats from a list.
 * When the title reads "History" it is very broad. History of what? The song? The band? There is very little history when actually reading that section.