User:A3341816/Maslow's hierarchy of needs

Lead
In the first section of the article, there's a part where the writer says that the hierarchy of needs ends with self-actualization but has a picture on the side that has transcendence as the last part of the pyramid.

"Maslow used the terms "physiological", "safety", "belonging and love", "social needs" or "esteem", "self-actualization" and "transcendence" to describe the pattern through which human motivations generally move."

Added a definition of "transcendence" in the lead

Article body
Added article links to "trust" and "acceptance" giving some more background information on them. Articles were found on wikipedia.

General thoughts
I don't see the need to have the first listing of under "ranking" in the criticisms tab. "In their extensive review of research based on Maslow's hierarchy, Wahba and Bridwell found little evidence for the ranking of needs that Maslow described or for the existence of a definite hierarchy at all." They state this with little additional knowledge on the topic. While the article and experiment is long I could give some more thought into adding to this section

''Instructor review: I can start to see your general outlines for thoughts on this article, but I encourage you to bring over more of the article so that I can tell what you plan to change. From what I see above, you have only added one small phrase to the statement you brought over and you are considering removing an image? In the general thoughts section you appear to be considering some additional edits/deletions. Again, I would encourage you to bring over more of the article and work further on edits you can both add and subtract from the existing article. Are either of the citations you included ones you have found or do they exist within the article already? You will need to insert new citations within the article as part of this assignment. Please let me know if you have questions/concerns (Liz)''