User:A5phan/Anti-sweatshop movement/Jdb004 Peer Review

General info
A5phan
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:A5phan/Anti-sweatshop movement
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Anti-sweatshop movement

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * Lead: While the added sentence contributes to the rather short it is not fully addressed in the article. The lead should represent the article and if you added more information about the sentence added in the article.
 * Content: I do not see any added content.
 * Tone and Balance: The rephrasing of the sentence in the saftey regulations section is more neutral than before but could be a little rough to read.
 * Sources and References: None added.
 * Organization: Not changed
 * Images: None in the article but could use some, possibly from current movements and old movements.
 * Overall: the additions are currently incomplete but if finished could add important information to the article.