User:A5phan/Anti-sweatshop movement/Trollny Peer Review

General info
A5phan
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:A5phan/Anti-sweatshop_movement?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Anti-sweatshop-movement

Evaluate the drafted changes
The tone of the added changes are neutral, made sure to not take stances on the topic. Most of the changes added context to their respective paragraphs. The sources added does seems to be a reliable secondary source.