User:AA07232021/Environmental gentrification/Sleepwalker1999 Peer Review

I think the information that you guys are using is super beneficial to the entire page. the lead is very informational but, I do hope that you guys are gonna divide some of the information up so it can be a better as a whole page. other than spreading the information out among the entire article I think the information up the whole article compared to what it used to be. the references that you guys have are really awesome looking source but, I don't know if you guys want to use more than just a couple to add to it. I also noticed that your page has a header for Vancouver but no information so maybe change that but other than that it looks like a lot of the information that is helpful seem to come from you guys.

yes this is the plan to divide it up and hopefully begin to separate it into portions.

Sleepwalker1999

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