User:ABuescher/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
J. Jonah Jameson (film character)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I am a fan of Spiderman and J. Jonah Jameson is an important character who is often over looked and yet has only really been played by one actor.

Evaluate the article
This article was well put together and held an appropriate amount of facts. The citations were good and there was never a moment where I felt a citation was needed and wasn't provided. I felt that the ordering and overall structure could be improved to be more comprehensive and easier to navigate. The contents titles were long and not entirely the best descriptors. I felt that there could have been a better more distinct distinction between the MCU Sony and Comics when it came to the organization. Each major "owner" should have their own section in the article instead of lumping them all together under other sections.

The writing was conscious and clear and easy to read offering a well rounded understanding of the character. However certain moments felt like it was being told from an article about Spiderman instead of an article about J. Jonah Jameson.

This article was rated a c-Class article of low importance which felt accurate. There is also a lot of talk going on about the organization and separation of the different incarnations of the characters which was where my biggest concern lied.