User:ACMetro/Respiratory syncytial virus/Anicm1 Peer Review

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General Info

I am reviewing ACMetro’s work.

Link to draft: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Respiratory_syncytial_virus

Lead Section: Good

-         The first sentence states the article topic concisely and accurately.

-         All the information included is also present in the body.

-         Although it summarizes most major points, there are some important aspects of the diagnosis, prevention, and treatment that should also be included in this section.

Content/Organization: Excellent

-         Very good work on the organization of the page. There are very clear and appropriate headings and subheadings that make it easier to read. I can tell you put a lot of work into this.

-         The content you added enhances the quality of the article!

-         I did not notice any grammatical/spelling errors.

-         Readability is appropriate for the lay audience.

-         Content is complete and your links are appropriate.

Tone and Balance: Excellent

-         Tone in your writing is neutral and appropriately focuses on stating the information in an unbiased manner.

Sources and References: Excellent

-         It is awesome to see that you added a large number of references that are mainly secondary and tertiary resources!

-         Your references are also mainly all up to date. I noticed some older papers from the 1950s, but it seems those references are associated with statements made in the History section (which is appropriate).

-         The few links that I checked worked effectively.

Images and Media: Excellent

-         Under the Cause section I appreciate your use of images to describe the virology. It allows for better visualization of the structure and life cycle of the virus.

-         Well done on the captions.

Overall Impressions: Excellent

Overall, your additions to this article are very apparent and definitely has improved the overall quality of this article. The organization, completeness, and readability really stand out to me. I appreciate your use of images and media to add context to the text. I am looking forward to seeing how you will add to the lead section to improve its completeness.