User:ACraigh/sandbox

Article Evaluation
Tone:

- Replace the word "tragedy" throughout with "account".

- Take out "clearly" in the second sentence as well as other definitive words.

- Should not refer to what author believes Rankine is trying to say.

- Lots of personal opinions that should be removed or rephrased.

- Sounds more like a paper than a wiki article.

- Should be summarized more than it is, as is it sounds more like a synopsis of the book rather than an encyclopedia.