User:AEK7/Civil Rights Act of 1960/Csparks01 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AEK7, because they are also doing a Civil Rights Act


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:AEK7/Civil Rights Act of 1960
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Civil Rights Act of 1960

Evaluate the drafted changes
It was hard to give a good review here, only because not much was worked on in the sandbox draft. Most of the work was ideas on what to change about the article, which I fully agree upon. An article should always have a strong legislative background and events to set up the Act. This doesn't need to be mentioned, but brown v. board of education can be added, since it started the Civil Rights Movement.

Besides the information presented in the article (article page), I would suggest adding more information in the titles. Some of them just seem a little smaller than others, and it's always nice to get more context out of titles and what they do overall. I would suggest adding to Title I, IV, V, and VII. The subsequent information is also interesting.

I look forward to seeing more of your article, especially when it's all finalized. You got this!