User:AF1798/Pyrethrin/Spmg98 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Spmg98)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AF1798/Pyrethrin/Spmg98_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pyrethrin

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Overall, the wikipedia page has a good amount of information covering Pyrethrin in terms of the history with background information, explaining the toxicity as well how safe it is, and the physical & chemical properties of some pyrethrins chart provided. I honestly didn't find any errors on this page, the only thing I would recommend is adding about 2-3 more sections to add more information. Although the chart that is provided I notice some numbers are missing maybe fill them in, so the readers can have a better overview of this topic being covered. As in for the other information you could add would be side effects if any and possibly add more to the Environmental effects section covering the land habitat as well if it affects the air. Besides that this wikipedia page is great and I enjoyed how this one topic was covered in detail.