User:AG029/Clarinet/Bandoputt Peer Review

Overall, I'd say you did a very good job on this article draft. I noticed that on the components section, it seems a little out of place to include the text concerning metronomes in this section. Moving it to a new section about practicing or rhythm would be preferable. It would also be beneficial to provide more details regarding the many kinds of metronomes that are available and how they operate. It would be helpful to make it clear in the section regarding swabs that they are used to remove moisture from the interior of the clarinet rather than the exterior. Further information on when and how to use cork grease is also needed in the paragraph about it. Also, the section on pop music may be lengthened to provide more instances of popular tunes that are suitable for the clarinet. The clarinet's suitability for this genre should also be discussed. Your information is up to date based on the research I did regarding your topics, and as far as content, information, structure, and grammar, I'd say you're on the right track.

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