User:AHoffman99/Valley Forge/Beaudidier Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AHoffman99


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User talk:AHoffman99/Valley Forge
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Valley Forge

Evaluate the drafted changes
There is not much in the draft that is intended to change the article, although it may be all that is needed to succeed in this project. A focus on the more modern meaning of Valley Forge as a national park rather than just a historical site with a meaning of horror and fighting. The proposed changes would help to change the narrative of horror and have the reader see Valley Forge for its significance and beauty. The sources that are linked do seem to be credible and relevant to the new narrative, but they are a bit outdated with one from the 90's and the other from the 70's.