User:AJS1998/Longitudinal fissure/Khyatipatel98 Peer Review

General info

 * Zshaw149, RaubieR, NinaLopergolo, Jpeloquin17, Lucinda Murray, Nrcsikai
 * Longitudinal fissure

Lead evaluation

 * The Lead has been updated to reflect the new content added by my peers.
 * The Lead includes an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic.
 * The Lead includes a brief description of the article's major sections.
 * The Lead does not include information that is not present in the article.
 * The Lead is concise and not overly detailed.

Content evaluation

 * The added content is relevant to the topic.
 * The added content is up-to-date.
 * There does not appear to be content that is missing or content that does not belong.

Tone and balance evaluation

 * The added content is neutral.
 * There are no claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position.
 * There do not appear to be viewpoints that are overrepresented or underrepresented.
 * The added content does not attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another.

Sources and references evaluation

 * The new content is backed up by a reliable secondary source of information.
 * The sources thorough - i.e. They reflect the available literature on the topic.
 * The sources are current.
 * The links appear to work.

Organization evaluation

 * The added content is well-written - i.e. It is concise, clear, and easy to read.
 * The added content does not have any grammatical or spelling errors.
 * The added content is well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic.

Images and media evaluation

 * The article includes images that enhance understanding of the topic.
 * The images are well-captioned.
 * All images appear to adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations.
 * The images are laid out in a visually appealing way.

Overall evaluation

 * The added content improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. The article is more complete.
 * Strengths of the added content added include relevant material and well organization.
 * The added content can be improved through better organization of "additional images."