User:AL43521/Gender and religion/AriBerry501 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

The username of the individual I am peer reviewing is AL43521.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:AL43521/Gender and religion
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * No new photos have been included in the article, however, several sections have been edited.
 * Grammatical errors within the article have been addressed and fixed. Diction and sentence structure within the various sections have also been addressed and fixed.
 * Duplicated links were deleted and new links were embedded within the article.
 * Punctuation errors were addressed and fixed several times. Biased statements previously written within the article were also removed to prevent biased opinions being presented as factual, trustworthy information.
 * Links are operational and have been updated within the article

All changed made within the article sandbox were critical to helping improve the article. It's good that the biased information was removed. Accurate corrections for punctuation and diction were added and unnecessary sentences and/or words were removed. The user has done well to help update the article and address important changes. No images were added into the article but it may be a good idea to include some visuals for any sections applicable. The article is also well-organized and written. While there aren't many additions made to the article, the corrections made help make the article feel more complete. All new content makes the article feel natural and easy to read.

User AL43521 did a good job updating the article.