User:ALR Student/Digital Search and Seizure/Jnasiri Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ALR Student


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ALR%20Student/Digital_Search_and_Seizure?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
The Lead is perfect - it clearly and concisely summarizes the overall theme of the article without diving into any specific issues. The Article Body also offers a comprehensive overview of digital search and seizure, and the organization makes sense to me, starting with history/broader ideas and narrowing down by the end. The only organization-related suggestion I would make is that the first sentence of the last paragraph is kind of long and confused me when I first read it. Other than that, I really don't have many suggestions for improvement. The citations all look good, and the links worked in all of them. Your sources all seem reliable as well. Overall, the Article looks great!