User:ALR Student/Digital Search and Seizure/Mets6559 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ALR Student


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ALR%20Student/Digital_Search_and_Seizure?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Digital Search and Seizure

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

Lead is nice and concise, I get a good idea of what the topic is exactly with that definition. Could possibly add another sentence or two for more context.

Content:

The content is all relevant to the topic. I think headings that break down the subjects would be helpful in the final version of the article. I feel like the topic is presented really well in a way that makes it easy for a layman to understand the topic.

Tone and Balance:

Content is presented neutrally and without bias.

Sources and References:

Well sourced, it looks like almost everything has a source citation already.

Organization:

Content is all well organized. Feels like a good flow from one subject to another, no halting changes. No spelling or grammar errors, either!

Overall:

Looks like a great addition to an empty article that covers a topic that really needs a wiki article!