User:AMaizing2021/Chemosensory Speciation/Kira-g.w.w. Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AMaizing2021


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AMaizing2021/Chemosensory_Speciation/Kira-g.w.w._Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Chemosensory speciation

Evaluate the drafted changes
Really great job on this piece. The layout of the topic and organization of the information is neatly done and to the point. super easy to read and understand and a great topic, nice job! The comments I left are invisible comments left at the end of the paragraph they pertain to. One comment I left at one of the beginning paragraphs mentions the separation you talk about may be not be as easily laid out as it could be and further clarification may benefit the reader. I also mention an addition that could possibly be added in host recognition. Finally, the last comment I left is more of a suggestion in that I think the last section kind of drops off a bit sharply for an article and think some kind of an exit sentence could be inserted there. Other than that great topic. I, personally, love reading about chemical signaling in different species so reading this article was fun! Great job.