User:AMousou/Medium ground finch/Octobercosmos Peer Review

General info
AMousou, Fevans9, Ayahbear127
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AMousou/Medium_ground_finch?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Medium ground finch
 * Medium ground finch

Lead
The lead has been updated, and new content has been added. The introductory sentence does describe the topic of the article, the medium ground finch. The lead does include some information about article sections. However, the lead could still use some further refinement, focused particularly on the section of the lead that discusses how it has been studied by Darwin and the discussion in morphology changes and what could have caused it. The possible causes of changes in the ground finch that are briefly introduced need sources that would support the statements. It becomes difficult to follow the information towards the end of the lead, it is advised that this section undergo an edit that would reorganize the information provided, so that it is easier to follow for the reader.

Content
At this stage the draft contains a lead with a broad overview of the organization of the body article. In addition, the presentation outline provided shows that there is an intention to build up the article. Since there is little to no addition in terms of the content it would not be fair to evaluate this portion at present.

Tone and Balance
The content in the lead starts off neutral and balanced. However, further into the lead there are claims that need resources for them to be recognized as valid.

Sources and References
At this stage of the draft there are no references that are included. It would be advised to use up to date publications that are neutral and come from a variety of sources just like the exercise modules recommend.

Organization
Organization of the article according to the sections proposed for the body show that additions and changes to the article are well thought out. It would have been more insightful to see slightly more detail even if only for a few sections to see how the ideas proposed in the outline would link together.

Images and Media
The main page (unedited) of the article does contain images of the medium ground finch and the range map. At this stage of the article draft there there are not any additional images or media to be added.