User:AOpland/Denitrification/Joh19094 Peer Review

General info
AOpland
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:AOpland/Denitrification:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Denitrification:

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hey there! Looks like your current sandbox for this article is a work in progress. Mine too. I'll keep the peer review accordingly short.

I think the content you've proposed adding is relevant to the article. Your sources look reasonably up to date for what the topic is. Also, any links you've added to these sources seem to be working. You could stand to add a couple more sources with regard to what you've proposed to add, but I'm assuming that building that bibliography list is a work in progress too.

The tone and balance of what you've proposed to add is neutral and fair. I think the inclusion of the broader ecological significance could be interesting and I was surprised to see that hadn't been added yet.

You proposed adding more of a mention to partial denitrification. It seems to me like this is already discussed in the "Half reactions" and "Conditions of denitrification" section, but adding a mention of this into the introduction seems like a good plan seeing as the Lead section is supposed to be a road map for what is to come in the rest of the article.